Comments on: Sunday Picture Post 3 / Tip: Int./Ext.

By: Jaden

Jaden — Wed, 30 Apr 2008 19:06:50 +0000

ANA PT — Way to come on scene with a bang! Thanks for participating with us on the Sunday Picture Posts. This tunnel one here that you write got me all choked up and teary eyed — it’s really good. Welcome. Looking forward to more of your creative writing.

By: Ana PT

Ana PT — Wed, 30 Apr 2008 17:25:25 +0000

- Blurry

- There’s always a light at the end of every tunnel, at the end of every life

- Traveling by car seems more dangerous everyday. Even more dangerous in this tunnel, where a forgotten myth started decades ago and a group of friends has an accident . A survivor of the accident becomes depressed and walks everyday into the tunnel,not knowing why but just feeling why,and one day,when he’s most aware, he sees a blurry face on the wall of the tunnel. He never believed in God but he had to believe his friends were still alive and their souls were just trapped in some other world. The only survivor ever, fighting his own inner battles, tries to bring his friends back what he doesn’t know is that there are more souls than his friends’ and that they already passed away they just can’t find their light.
It’s a discovery of what humans have the will to do just to feel and how they really feel when they find out they can’t do anything or everything

By: Jean

Jean — Tue, 25 Mar 2008 23:37:36 +0000

Wow….I didn’t know it was a French tunnel! I was just making up the Russian vs. French.

By: Jaden

Jaden — Tue, 25 Mar 2008 20:41:58 +0000

JED – I always think of Princess Diana when I look at that tunnel picture. I have seen where Princess Diana crashed and have passed through that tunnel many times. I was in Paris when it happened. Before she died, I always thought to myself: This is a really dangerous spot. It’s a pretty gnarly veer. Though the paparazzi surely may have caused the accident, even without them, it is a rough spot. Driving in Europe is much crazier on those fast compact roads than in the large spaciousness of America.

By: Jed

Jed — Tue, 25 Mar 2008 17:33:33 +0000

First of all, great and fantastic new lay-out, I know it’s still the same, but the look and feel- it’s more sophisticated! Very appealing!

On to the picture post…let me continue my being ’sentimental’… LOL

Tragedy

A much maligned ‘royalty’ who is with her lover, is being pursued by a group of hungry wolves, known as the papzi…

I know, I know, I have no originality, but all I can think about tunnels is the late Princess Diana…

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That J Mafia is yeah, pretty funny Jan!

By: Jaden

Jaden — Mon, 24 Mar 2008 00:00:27 +0000

JAN – WOW! That was a great pitch. It was not too long for an elevator pitch. There’s a movie I would go to see. Hope somebody picks that one up and runs with it. Yeah, I realize there are 5 of us in the J Movie Mafia; pretty funny. Glad you enjoyed that.

By: JAN

JAN — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 22:08:51 +0000

Claustophobic

An underground ring of internet hackers known as the **J Mafia, has caused a worldwide unfixable computer crash on every worldwide computer. They’re asking for billions and billions of dollars in ransom from all the worldwide business conglomerates, presidents, royalty, etc. The J Mafia is en route to their underground complex underneath the Eiffel Tower. The twist, the leader of the J Mafia is the son of Bill Gates who unexpectedly, has a fall and gets amnesia, and he’s the only one who knows the number sequences to get all the worldwide computers back!

** In honour of the “J Mafia” here on Screenwriting for Hollywood, LOL!

I realize my movie pitch is a bit too long….

By: Jaden

Jaden — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 18:56:36 +0000

JEAN – Good call. That is a French tunnel. I guess that makes me the Russian mob. And yeah, I drive pretty fast… while snapping photos! Am a bad girl. *smiling*

By: Jean

Jean — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 18:44:02 +0000

High speed chase.

The Russian mob is pursuing a French murder witness in order to get rid of the evidence.