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	<title>Comments on: HAPPY NEW YEAR 2009!</title>
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		<title>By: t.sterling</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwritingforhollywood.com/writing-prompts/happy-new-year-2009/comment-page-1#comment-3734</link>
		<dc:creator>t.sterling</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Jan 2009 05:43:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m so bad at re-re-re-replying.  Is it normal to be nervous to be leader of a gang?  I mean it&#039;s different when it&#039;s my own blog.  But yeah, I guess I&#039;m ready.  I feel like I&#039;m being pushed out on stage from behind the curtain.  Again, sorry for the late responses.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m so bad at re-re-re-replying.  Is it normal to be nervous to be leader of a gang?  I mean it&#8217;s different when it&#8217;s my own blog.  But yeah, I guess I&#8217;m ready.  I feel like I&#8217;m being pushed out on stage from behind the curtain.  Again, sorry for the late responses.</p>
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		<title>By: admin</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwritingforhollywood.com/writing-prompts/happy-new-year-2009/comment-page-1#comment-3719</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jan 2009 07:26:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That was really fun everyone. Thanks for participating.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That was really fun everyone. Thanks for participating.</p>
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		<title>By: Jaden</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jaden</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jan 2009 05:25:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Indeed you are Indoob. We are coming upon your month of February when you shall be the leader of the gang. Came up fast, didn&#039;t it?!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Indeed you are Indoob. We are coming upon your month of February when you shall be the leader of the gang. Came up fast, didn&#8217;t it?!</p>
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		<title>By: t.sterling</title>
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		<dc:creator>t.sterling</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jan 2009 04:04:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tee-hee... I&#039;m in a gang.... :oD</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tee-hee&#8230; I&#8217;m in a gang&#8230;. :oD</p>
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		<title>By: Jaden</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jaden</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Jan 2009 06:53:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>SizzlyP -- Heck Yeah! You run with it... Going big!
Great concise descriptions of your characters.
This is really funny and natural brain wave activity, &quot;What are we doing tonight? Oh, yeah! We’re...&quot; Good job. 

Just so that other readers are clear about your CU usage, I want to explain for them...

CU [close up] would only be in the script for a few reasons:

1) You are the director and therefore this is your shooting script. 
2) It is a shooting script prepared for film production.
3) It is absolutely crucial to understanding the story. 

When writing scripts FOR SALE, we must limit directorial type instructions in the script, only adding those absolutely necessary to the story. You want your reader (agents, producers, actors, directors...) to be absorbed in the story, not distracted by the technicalities, most of which will be obvious to them. 

Extensive details on how to shoot, how to deliver lines, how to dress, how to set the scene, should be left up to the people who do those jobs, respectively the director, the actor, the costumer, and the set production, and so on. You want to write your screenplay as tight and vibrant as possible.

In Sizzling Popcorn&#039;s example, we will assume that he is the director because that&#039;s how we roll &#039;round here -- a do-it-yourself kind of gang. ;-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>SizzlyP &#8212; Heck Yeah! You run with it&#8230; Going big!<br />
Great concise descriptions of your characters.<br />
This is really funny and natural brain wave activity, &#8220;What are we doing tonight? Oh, yeah! We’re&#8230;&#8221; Good job. </p>
<p>Just so that other readers are clear about your CU usage, I want to explain for them&#8230;</p>
<p>CU [close up] would only be in the script for a few reasons:</p>
<p>1) You are the director and therefore this is your shooting script.<br />
2) It is a shooting script prepared for film production.<br />
3) It is absolutely crucial to understanding the story. </p>
<p>When writing scripts FOR SALE, we must limit directorial type instructions in the script, only adding those absolutely necessary to the story. You want your reader (agents, producers, actors, directors&#8230;) to be absorbed in the story, not distracted by the technicalities, most of which will be obvious to them. </p>
<p>Extensive details on how to shoot, how to deliver lines, how to dress, how to set the scene, should be left up to the people who do those jobs, respectively the director, the actor, the costumer, and the set production, and so on. You want to write your screenplay as tight and vibrant as possible.</p>
<p>In Sizzling Popcorn&#8217;s example, we will assume that he is the director because that&#8217;s how we roll &#8217;round here &#8212; a do-it-yourself kind of gang. ;-)</p>
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